Mmmn... Looks impressive, sure, but a touch too choppy, ne? It adds something to it, but it also detracts a bit from the flow of it. Looks a bit off with the set lines above, then the swish all over the bottom and such. Perhaps it's just a question of balance, eh? *shrugs* Good colors though, you're definitely getting alot better with this. *claps* Keep it up, my friend. ^_^
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